-Catchy title
-Develop my analysis from the 1st and 2nd scene in the PSA
-Add scene text to and extra evidence to PSA
-Connect real world into implications
-Include page numbers and get better scholarly sources
-Explain Stem Cell Research and how it works more in depth
-A paragraph to explain unethical views of Stem Cell Research
-More evidence for "worse consequences"
-Include better transitions into my paper
-Conclusion paragraph:
1. Explain what would happen in Stem Cell Research went wrong or
2. Explain if everyone worked and put efforts to Stem Cell Research, explain what could happen
I think we're struggling with the same types of problems with our papers!
ReplyDeleteYeah I think we're all pretty much in the same boat here
ReplyDeleteSeems like we have similar problems.
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