Thursday, October 25, 2012

Blog 24: Summary of Conclusion

-Transition: small bridge back to the show, probably going back to saying something like "This is much like the examples from Firefly"

-New scene: Firefly "Safe".  Use the scene where Simon gets kidnapped

Analysis: Talk about how Simon assumed the people who kidnapped him were going to kill him or force him into slavery when in reality they treated him very well and just wanted a doctor.

Advice: Not quite sure yet

Conclusion: Re-summarize and wrap up the paper

1 comment:

  1. Your transition is a point that you may want to focus on because it keeps the reader engaged.

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