- add more to analysis and make it clear
- possibly find better second scene and write better analysis
- use more evidence from the scenes
- introduce the secondary sources better
- develop more of the SSI part and rearrange
- fix the sources section
- I need to overall edit and add more to my paper
Friday, October 19, 2012
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Suggestion: The transitions from paragraph to paragraph is key because it keeps the reader engaged.
ReplyDeleteUse your introduction to really bring them in and then use seamless transitions to keep it smooth so that they don't get bored and lose interest.
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