Blogg 22: ARP Specifics

-Catchy Title

-Works Cited needs to be in alphabetical order

-In transition paragraph I need broader examples

-Need to be address stereotyping more broadly then dive into Maclin's study

-Don't need author's name after quote if I start the quote by saying that she said it.  Just need the page number

-Need to not get personal by directly addressing the reader (when I got into saying "Now think about" and stuff like that"

-Need much better transitions

-Need to summarize my first scene quicker

-Touch up scene descriptions and analysis and be more to the point in my analysis paragraphs.  Start them off with my main point

-Broaden up my real world connection

-Point out that Nikita's men weren't stereotyping Mal based on him being a criminal, but off of what they as criminals would do

-Go more in depth with the negative outcomes of stereotyping

Conclusion Paragraph:
-Talk more about the negative effects of stereotypes and the negative things that resulted from them in Firefly.

-Talk about the opportunities that not stereotyping opens up for people