Friday, October 19, 2012
Blog 22: ARP Specifics
- Don't introduce my real world connection so early
- Give more evidence supporting my claims
- Add more dialogue to scenes and trim fat
- Expand implications paragraph
- ADD QUOTES!!!
- Introduce better what human trafficking is and don't compare and contrast
- Real world example
- Use author names when making citations
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Were you the one person who didn't mess up your works cited?
ReplyDeleteNo I forgot the authors name or something.
ReplyDeleteYes! adding quotes is a huge overlooked part of the SSI. I also need to focus a little more on that.
ReplyDeleteYea im gonna load my paper with those!
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