Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Blog 23: Title and Intro

Explosive Technology: What Happens When Technology Develops too Fast?
Explosive Technology: The Repercussions Unregulated Technological Growth in Dollhouse and the World

Intro: What does the future have in store for human kind? Will we have the technology of mind control or maybe human cloning? These are technologies humans may obtain in the future and things that they must be prepared to deal with. As the development of technology accelerates so do the dangers it poses to the world. It is important to look toward the future and regulate technology in a way that it won't become destructive so humans don't destroy themselves or the planet.

11 comments:

  1. You had me at explosive. interesting title, way to utilize your homonyms (i think).

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  2. Maybe use the word repercussions in your title...might be a good word to use to describe out comes of technology developing too fast.

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  3. Great title. This is one of my weak points.

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  4. The questions are a good way to keep my attention. They always get me thinking and make me want to find out what the rest of your paper is going to be about. Good job!

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  5. I updated by subtitle to include the show name and tried to change it up a bit.

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  6. Little more detail of your intro might be better to grab a tension of the readers.

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  7. Yeah, I think it needs to be long and more detailed.

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  8. I like the title, definitely draws in the reader.

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  9. Your second title is the most gripping and it uses that series name in it

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  10. Opps I forgot the "of" in the second title.

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  11. Thanks for the feedback I will probably use the second title.

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