Monday, October 22, 2012

Blog 23: Title and Introduction

Stereotypical Title: Finding the Flaws With Stereotypes in Firefly and Our World Today

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This Is A Stereotypical Title For An Essay About Stereotypes.

We always hear stories on the news about large events such as bombings, killings, robberies.  But most of the time we don't actually experience any of those events.  What we do do, however, is form an opinion on those involved in the story.  This is a problem in our society that happens everyday.  When we judge people without actually knowing them we often limit the opportunities of those being judged. This provides for an unfair environment and often demoralizes those groups.

8 comments:

  1. Your title choices are catchy. The second maybe a little more.

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  2. I agree the titles are clever, but I like the first one more.

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  3. I like the title. It is catchy and grabs my attention. But i feel like your intro could be a little bit longer. Other than that i enjoyed it!

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  4. Maybe more detail in the paragraph will help people to understand better.

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  5. Thanks. Any ideas on how to include the show name in there?

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  6. Your first title includes the show title and works very well in my opinion.

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  7. Yeah, the you seem to have already added the show name to the first title so I would use that one.

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  8. Thanks for the input. And I completely forgot that I had used the show in the title...

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