Section 1:
-Use active voice, it is more direct and vigorous than passive voice
-Avoid making one passive depend directly upon another
-There will be times when substituting and transitive int he active voice for some perfunctory expression
Section 2:
1a. In our world today, we have other powerful
technologies and discoveries happening even faster than the past.
2a. In the case of the show, it is the beginning of
their apocalypse as most of the world turns into mindless creatures.
Section 3:
1b. Our world has other powerful technologies and discoveries happening faster than in the past.
2b. It is the beginning of the "tech" apocalypse, as most of the world have turned into mindless creatures.
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