Section One:
13) Omit Needless Words
- Getting rid of unnecessary words helps add to the conciseness of your paper.
ex.) he is a man who- he
- the fact should be taken out of any sentence
- who and which was should also be removed
14.) Avoid a succession of loose sentences
- Taking out those loose sentences allows for a better flowing, shorter paragraph that gets your point across more clearly.
Section Two:
The changes that were needed to be made were made in my paper
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