- Omit needless words, phrases, or sentences
-Avoid a loose succession of loose sentences
Section 2:
1a. Rich clients rent these Dolls out for large amounts of money for specific and various jobs or events.
2a. This study has been rated as highly unethical by
many scientists and the public media because Stem Cell research has mainly been
known to use human fetuses to contract the stem cells from, which also involves
using dead human embryos.
3a. Yamanaka was an orthopedic surgeon and is known
for discovering how to induce stem cells and make them pluripotent, able to
adapt to any tissues or organs in the body.
4a. Yet, in this new found discovery, Yamanaka and
Gurdon have found a way to research this topic without using human embryos,
which some see to cancel out the claim of unethical values.
Section 3:
1b. Rich clients expensively rent these Dolls for various jobs or events. (18 to 11 words)
2b. This study is rated highly unethical by scientists and media because stem cell research is known to use dead human fetuses to contract the stem cells. (40 to 26 words)
3b. Yamanaka, an orthopedic surgeon, is known for showing how to induce stem cells and make them pluripotent, able to adapt to any tissues or organs in the body. (30 to 28 words)
4b. Yet, Yamanaka and Gurdon have found a way to execute this experiment without using human embryos; this can cancel out the claim of unethical values. (32 to 25 words)
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