Omit Needless Words:
Make your
writing concise. Do not include unnecessary words or sentences that do not add
to the meaning. “The fact” should be taken out of every sentence.
Avoid a succession of loose sentences:
A loose
sentence is consists of two co-ordinate clauses, the second introduced by a
conjunction or relative. These loose sentences break of the flow of a paragraph
when strung together. They should be mixed with shorter sentences.
“The very fact that
such weapons exist threatens the world.”
The existence of
such weapons threatens the world.
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