Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Blog 29: EoS III: 12 & 15 & 16 & 18

Section One:

12.) Put statements in positive form.
- Use the word not as a form of denial, not as a form of evasion.
- Other negative words besides not are usually strong

15.) Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form.
- Keep similar content together in structure for a better flowing paper.
- Not keep your ideas parallel can make the writer look timid or undecided.
- All congruent ideas should be the same in presentation.

16.) Keep related words together.
- Such as, title and author.
- The phrase between the related words needlessly breaks up the sentence.
- Modifiers should be next to the word they modify.

18.) Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end.
- Put the word or words you are trying to stress at the end of a sentence.
- Another common place for prominent words is at the beginning of a sentence.

Section Two:

My paper was generally pretty solid in all 4 rules. The mistakes came with rule 18 and i fixed that in my paper.

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