Blog 27: EoS III: 11

Section One:

1.Active voice is more direct than passive.

2.Active voice often shortens the sentence while getting the point across more clearly

Section Two:

1a. And the studies that she conducted showed that we as people stereotype certain characteristics to be those of criminals, such as race, tattoos, hairstyle, and the size of their clothing
1b. Maclin's studies show that we as people stereotype certain characteristics to be those of criminals, such as race....etc.